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"An arrogant one you are," he said between long, labored breaths.
"You're mistaking confidence for arrogance," Siamera replied, "a rather common mistake."
Slowly raising his sword, he points it at her. "Let's see how confident you'll be after I cut off a limb or two."
"If you're feeling froggy…." She smiles. "Then jump," motioning with her hands for him to charge her.
He laughs as he draws his sword back and runs straight for her again. She braces herself for his attack but inches before reaching her, he propels himself in the air. Lifting his giant sword up over his head as his large form blocks out the sun, then plummets down over her. Siamera rolles out of  the way right before the sword buries itself in the arena ground.
"Didn't think he'd take me literally," she quietly, muttered to herself.
Pulling his sword from the dirt, "for someone so confident you runaway a awful lot."
"As opposed to getting my head cut off, yeah I guess I kind a do," Siamera replied, picking herself up off the ground.
"All the dodging in the world will not protect you for long!" He yelled charging at her again.
She jumps away as once more his blade flies at her. The fight intensifies as Silex attacks comes faster and more vicious then before, it is all Siamera can do to keep one step ahead of his sword.
But soon she finds herself running out of ground as the granite walls approach from behind.
She decides the time to disarm him is now at hand. Using the stone wall behind her as a step, she quickly ricochets up spanning the distance between their sizes.
Before Silex can react she slams his wrist with a hard kick, causing the sword to fly out of his grasp and through the air. It glints in the sun as it spirals up to the stands while bystanders quickly scatter out of it's path. It lands, piercing one of the recently abandoned bleacher seats.
"Well," Siamera smiles. "Some lucky fan will be taking home a little souvenir tonight."
His face tightened with anger, it appears he is no longer amused by her little remarks.
"You think you're safe now," he warned.
Before she could make her quick retort, his knuckles met her face.
Sending her colliding with the wall behind her, she slid down to the hot dirt.
For a moment, the world around her blends into a simple mess and all definition is gone.
Her vision focuses as the large blur approaching her takes shape. She quickly ducks down as Silex's fist strikes the wall behind her, cracking it.
He leans down, coming close to Siamera's face. "Funny, you don't look so confident anymore."
yay another page, I know I call them chapters that there really were like pages.
I haven’t given up on my thunder cats fan fiction, I’ve just been working a lot and haven’t really got the time to sit and think.
But anyway so were still in the mists of this fight, I didn’t intend for it to be this long but it will be coming to an end shortly I promise you that. And hopefully we can get on with the real story here (and trust me there is a real story). I’m hoping by the next chapter I can have this fight all wrapped up and we can begin with the adventure.
.....and as always pardon my poor grammar skills...oh and comment please.....(the good & the bad, I don't mind)

Chapter 1 Determined to Win-> [link]
Chapter 2 Tense but Ready-> [link]
Chapter 3 Face to Face-> [link]
Chapter 5 A Challenge-> [link]
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Yoruhoshi Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooh, I loved this chapter, sweetie! You did very well with the fight scene! *gasps in shock* And that cliffhanger! It's killing me! D: I want moar!
Sorry, I'm getting a bit excited. ^^;
But in all honesty sweetie, I loved this chapter, and I'm really really glad you haven't given up on this fanfiction!
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nick-a-nu Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm so glad you like it, and thank you.
I was afraid the fight was a bit too blow by blow,
so I'm happy to hear that you approve...

and no worries I have no plans on stopping anytime soon...It just may take a little longer for me, with juggling work and all....but I'm dedicated...^-^
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Yoruhoshi Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're more than welcome, dear!
And I'm actually one of those readers who can appreciate a blow by blow fight, especially in a fanfic for a fandom I love! One of my favorite authors in the world, he can write a perfectly choreographed, blow-by-blow battle in his books, and it might go on for thirteen, fifteen pages! So I love the detail and dedication anyone shows to building a good fight scene, and I definitely approve! You did incredibly well!

And hey, that's not a problem at all, dear! You've got your priorities in order, and I'm glad that you do. :tighthug: I'd rather hear that you were taking care of the things you need to instead of working on a fanfiction twenty-four-seven, even if I love the fanfic. Remember: taking care of YOU and the things you need to do is always the most important!
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moonie-love-child Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
Woohoo! A new chapter! Can't wait to see how she fights her way out of this one. I'm hoping work is overworking you! All work and no play... well you know. ;)
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nick-a-nu Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I get ya....but luckily this and drawing keeps me sane...well as sane as one like me can be XP

as you well know yourself...^-^
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moonie-love-child Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
Not too sane, because that's boring. ;)
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PhantomCelebi498 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome! You're back! :XD: I'm really looking forward to seeing the end of this :) I love how it's going so far!
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nick-a-nu Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
did I go somewhere? X3
I'm really glad to hear that.....I apprecuate it greatly.
I try to keep it interesting for ya ^-^
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PhantomCelebi498 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:XD: it's been awhile since the last chapter :XD: but I watched you, so i don't have to worry about searching for them anymore :XD: and you're quite welcome!
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BuddhistGuy Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
It's always a fun little treat to read your story's chapters. I'd call them 'Fun Size'
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